Monday, 18 May 2015

Task 4: Reflection - LO5

Our production team were asked to create a 5 minute script for an episode of The Games Corner for Sheffield Live! TV. The Games Corner is a video game magazine style programme which reviews new releases, gaming events and brings the latest news to the viewers. With the help of Ahmed Asif and Junaid Rehman, we created a script consisting of recent topics unique from other episode's scripts which included reviews of Project CARS, PAX Expo, EGX Rezzed and announced technology.

Target Audience and Relevant examples in script

Sheffield Live! prides itself in being a community focused group which actively involves local volunteers to help create the shows and run the channel. The station helps organise events, create education, employment and training opportunities in the local area and advertise and promote local businesses. They believe that all its content should be beneficial to the community of Sheffield and shine a positive light on Sheffield's events and companies. It was important we reflected this in our script and so that was why we were asked to add a section talking about local game developers (Sumo Digital) as well as national news.



In the UK, according to The Guardian (above), more than a third of gamers are between the ages of 8 and 24; over 15 million are between 8 and 44, more than half of UK Gamers. For the script we have created, we are targeting those between 18 and 34 due to the content being more applicable to these ages. We wrote a topic reviewing 'Dark Souls: Scholar of the First Sin' which is an 18 rated video game. This can't be played by younger viewers of the show, which we expect to have watching due to the 8-17 age demographic having the greatest share of 22%. The Games Corner will be shown during daytime television pre-watershed meaning viewers of any age can access the show. To cater for younger audiences, we added a section reviewing a game appropriate for all ages, 'Disney Infinity 3', which has a 7+ Rating.

Client's Likes and Dislikes

Vicky particularly liked that the script had the correct format; 'Overall I really like the style of the script - I kept wanting to read!'. This shows that our attention to the script detail and it's 'timeline/running order' worked really well and was appropriate for the show. Vicky also replied to our question regarding Target Audience; ' It was very much suited towards the correct target audience and will be easy to understand for a variety of gamers'. This proves we had selected and aimed at entertaining the correct target audience in terms of demographic and interests. The only suggested improvement was that the script should bring attention to local and indie developers. This is so it would have a strengthened link with local viewers who may have interest in the work of Game Developers in and around Sheffield.

Changes Made

Based on our Feedback, we concluded we needed to add a local themed topic as well include a topic looking at gaming on other platforms (PC/Tablet etc.) and the work of indie developers. In our updated script we will be adding a segment talking about the latest work from local gaming developer, Sumo Games, based in Sheffield, who are currently working on creating Disney Infinity 3's racing mode. This satisfies the local aspect and indie developer suggestion made by the client.

Script Analysis
  1. Content and Layout
The content selected for our script reflected news that would be relevant and recent for the week of release for the particular episode of the Games Corner. Our script's first draft was completed for the 3rd of April 2015, meaning we looked at Games to be released around that week (Project CARS etc.) as well as gaming events immediately prior to that episode (e.g. EGX Rezzed). The topics also reflected the target audience as we used the proposed audience profile and moodboard to influence the scripts' content. The layout and format of the script follows the conventions of a script, where dialogue and the person speaking it is positioned in the 'justified centre' of the script. Directions for the camera, visual descriptions and scene expositions have been aligned to the right, separated from dialogue. 

Ethical and Legal Considerations

As we had a review for an explicit rated game, 'Dark Souls', it was important that were no explicit visuals or swearing shown due to the possibility of audiences under 18 watching it. We made sure that overall, the content of the script included no swearing, portrayal of offensive themes or visuals that may distressing to younger audiences (gore/sex etc.).

The topics that will be discussed by the hosts of the Games Corner are properly credited because they will say the companies responsible for developing and publishing the game (e.g. after introducing the first news piece about Dark Souls 2, Jordan states the game was created by FromSoftware and Bandai Namco Games). In order to use visuals and audio from games

Libel means 'false information', so we ensured that all facts were correct to the time of the episode. We used reliable and trusted sources from a range of websites to ensure that a particular story was correct. For example, we selected Project CARS as our Spotlight game review as we initially thought the game was to be released on the 2nd of April. Using IGN and Wikipedia, we found out that the game was being delayed and due to this, players would receive free content for waiting; 'Players will be offered additional free content for having to wait for the delays, as well as free cars every month. The first of which will be the Lykan Hypersport'. This news influenced our script and visuals. Because the news was from a reliable source, IGN which is a leader amongst videogame sites, it was viable to put this content in the script.

Task 3: What was changed on the script - LO4/LO5


THIS WAS ADDDED IN FOLLOWING THE FEEDBACK GIVEN FROM SHEFFIELD LIVE:


We wrote about SUMO DIGITAL as it is a local developer based in Sheffield. This topic relates to the Sheffield Live ethos of representing the community. 

Before:




After:

The highlighted text is the new topic added, that was recommended by SLTV.
A topic about a game was taken out and replaced by this topic regarding Sumo Digital.






Friday, 24 April 2015

Task 2: Production plan - LO5



Task 1: Summarising feedback/Evidence - LO5

The objective of this assignment was to create a news script for The Games Corner that would last 5 minutes. Each group was given a specific week to write about. The groups had to find relevant news for this week. Our week was week 4.

The target audience of The Games Corner are people who live in Sheffield and are interested in gaming. These people are ABC1s but could also be C2DEs as they will have some disposable income that will allow them to purchase a console and video games. These people are of both genders and are around the ages of 16 - 25.

The script we created is appealing to the target audience as we followed the style and conventions of a news broadcast script.



The feedback we were given was positive and we were told it was suitable for the show and was to a professional standard.

The only improvement we had to make was replacing one topic with a topic that relates to Sheffield, as SLTV is based around showcasing the community.

It was suggested that we added a section about a local developer who is based in Sheffield. This was done as we replaced a game release topic with news regarding Sumo Digital and their latest games.

The script also met the legal/ethical requirements/copyright/bias.

Task 4/5: Meeting minutes - LO4




Task 4: Revised script - LO4







Task 4: Meeting minutes - LO4


Task 3: Production schedule - LO4


Task 2: Feedback from SLTV - LO4






Task 1: Submitting script with questions - LO4

In todays lesson we will be talking to Vicky Kilby from SLTV in order to gain feedback. 
To gain feedback we will be asking the following questions:

Client feedback questions
​1. Was the script suited towards the correct target audience?
2. Was the script weighed evenly between both presenters?
3. Were the topics/subjects mentioned in the script suitable for The Games Corner?
(It was suggested that we possibly include coverage of news local to Sheffield; such as developments from video game companies in Sheffield and events.)
4. Was there enough variety in topics, (did they cover enough aspects of the gaming scene?
5. What improvements could be made on the script?

Below is a screenshot of the email sent to Vicky Kilby from SLTV:

 
 

Thursday, 16 April 2015

Task 3: Meeting minutes - LO3


Task 2: Production schedule - LO3



Task 1: First draft of script - LO3






 


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Client Feedback
Aside from a couple of grammatical errors, the first draft was generally well received. We asked the following 5 probing questions in order gain exact and concise feedback on what we can do to improve it.

​1. Was the script suited towards the correct target audience?
2. Was the script weighed evenly between both presenters?
3. Were the topics/subjects mentioned in the script suitable for The Games Corner?
(It was suggested that we possibly include coverage of news local to Sheffield; such as developments from videogame companies in Sheffield and events.)
4. Was there enough variety in topics, (did they cover enough aspects of the gaming scene?
5. What improvements could be made on the script?

Task 6: Meeting minutes - LO2



27/03/2015 Meeting Agenda
1.       Apologies – All Present
2.       Roles in the Team – Jake (Admin, Writer, Researcher), Junaid Rehman (Production Schedule, Mood board), Ahmed Asif (Production Schedule, Researcher, Writer)
3.       Content Ideas
4.       Deadlines – 3rd of April 2015
5.       AOB
D Distribution:
·         Pre-Production Materials created by team to be exchanged via blogger and e-mail
Minutes
Agenda Item
Discussion
Action
Deadline
Pre-Production Material Creation
Research Sessions – Select at least 5 topics to be covered during the script (3x Games Releases, New Technology Review, Expo Coverage) [Minute/Page per topic]
All Team (Internet)
30/03/15
Production Schedule
Ahmed, Word
30/03/15
Audience Profile
All Team, Create their own (Internet)
30/03/15
GANTT Chart
Junaid, Excel
30/03/15
Writing Jobs
Ahmed and Jake will write the script; Ahmed will write two game reviews and the Expo coverage section. He will send his version to Jake on the 1st of April so that he can add one game and technology review. The first draft of the script will be completed by 03/04/15.
Ahmed, Jake, Word Processor, Internet Access
03/04/15
Section 1 – Game 1
Ahmed “ “
1/04/15
Section 2 -  Game 2
Ahmed “ “
01/04/15
Section 2 – Game 3
Jake “ “
03/04/15
Section 3 – Expo Coverage
Ahmed “ “
01/04/15
Section 5 - Technology
Jake “ “
03/04/15
Final Check to be made before it’s sent to client on 03/04/15
Jake, Word Processor
03/04/15
AOB
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The websites we will be using to gain information:
Sumo digital news (2015) [Online], Available:
http://www.sumo-digital.com/

Xenonblade (2015) Xenon blade news [Online], Available:
http://uk.ign.com/games/xenoblade-chronicles/new-nintendo-3ds-20023996

Project cars (2015) [Online], Available:
http://www.wmdportal.com/projects/cars/

Pax Expo (2015) [Online], Available:
http://east.paxsite.com/