Thursday, 16 April 2015

Task 1: First draft of script - LO3






 


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Client Feedback
Aside from a couple of grammatical errors, the first draft was generally well received. We asked the following 5 probing questions in order gain exact and concise feedback on what we can do to improve it.

​1. Was the script suited towards the correct target audience?
2. Was the script weighed evenly between both presenters?
3. Were the topics/subjects mentioned in the script suitable for The Games Corner?
(It was suggested that we possibly include coverage of news local to Sheffield; such as developments from videogame companies in Sheffield and events.)
4. Was there enough variety in topics, (did they cover enough aspects of the gaming scene?
5. What improvements could be made on the script?

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